bird love

[hazel eyes]

Once upon a time a bird fell in love with a white rose. One day he (bird) proposed to her (white rose), but white rose refused. White rose said I don't love you. Bird daily came and proposed to her. Finally, white rose said when I will turn red, I will love you. One day bird came and cut his wings and spread his blood on the rose and the rose turned red. Then the rose realized how much bird loved her but it was too late because bird was dead. So respect the love and feelings of the person who loves you
:cwm16: :cwm16:

[][ وهج النور ][]

nice story
very sensetive and meaningful
thank's
take care

[hazel eyes]

thanx dear you light my page

[بصراوي مشاغب]

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حياج الله ياطيبة

[hazel eyes]

you are welcome i appreciate your nice words
thanx 4 u reply regards
هلا والله باهل البصرة الطيبين

[زهراء البتول]

well, it's such a nice story but u need 2 rewrite it again and give a stroger words bcoz u r talking with mature minds but ur story shows the opposite..
u know wat, ur short story gives a nice meaning of sacrifice and love which i really like 2 read
well done dear
and thanxxxx alot
my special regards 4 u
زهراء البتول

[hazel eyes]

شكرا اختي زهراء على مرورك واعتذارك وفرصة سعيد لتعارفنا
واني بعد قلبي طيب والي بقلبي على لساني
تسلمين يالغالية

[نبض بابل]

so sad
:shocked::shocked:

thanx alot

[hazel eyes]

عطرت صفحتي بمرورك الكريم
يعطيك العافية